The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed this reflection. I smiled as I read it and could relate in many different ways. You had a nice beginning that gave me insight right away about the MC's personality.

I did notice some tiny things like a comma after the word being (it would be similar to writing she ran, fast.) The other thing I noticed was that some of your sentences were repetitive. For example, in the penultimate paragraph I reworded it just a bit to show you what I mean about tightening up your sentences:
Actually, we are called to dress in the full armor of God. Recognizing this allows me to define my clothes rather than entertaining the thought that my clothes define me.

You covered the topic for sure while delivering an important message that most people will be able to relate to. I think you did a fine job of bringing the devotion full circle. I always enjoy message that help the reader understand in modern terms what the God is trying to communicate to us through His word. You did a fine job with this piece; it was a pleasure to read.
I liked the thoughts on the full armor of God...thanks for sharing and keep honing your writing skills...God bless you..
I really enjoyed reading your thoughts in this piece, and I appreciated the message about the armor of God and about what our clothes say--or don't say!--about us. :) Good job!