The Official Writing Challenge
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Thank you for writing this. It touched me greatly. Continue to write and allow your love to shine through your work. Great story.

God bless!
Great descriptive and emotional piece. I felt your words, and the meaning behind them. A deeply moving story. Thanks.
God bless~
This is a lovely testimonial. I think you should print this story out and keep it with the cup (assuming this is a true story.)

You did have quite a few little errors like putting back to back quotation marks. As long as it is the same person speaking you don't need the quotes around each sentence. If the same person is speaking and it's a new paragraph there are no end quotes until the dialog is complete, just beginning quotes at the start of the paragraph. Also the punctuation should go inside the quotation marks.

You did a nice job of matching the scriptures up with your message. You were definitely on topic. This was a sweet read and I look forward to reading more of your work. Good job.