The Official Writing Challenge
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Interesting. Some grammar issues and personally the theme was not to my liking, but others might find it enjoyable. Some strong truths withing the text. blessings - dub
Well, that is true. But it's so good to know Jesus, the sweetest fragrance in the world, that covers up all our smelly stains. Be blessed, littlelight
I love this line: "...You could have smelled like onions and brought tears to God eyes..."
Work on cleaning up spelling and grammar errors; you have something important to say.