The Official Writing Challenge
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11/01/05
Cute story! Some punctuation errors here and there. Very lively!
11/01/05
Very cute, this would make a good children's book, nice moral. Early paragraphs make sure you put dialog in separate paragraphs.
blessings dub
This is a great story!

Good job.

Doree
11/01/05
This would make a great children's book! Can't wait to see who you are so I can read more of your work. Your title caught my eye, because it's my favorite Christmas song.
11/01/05
Cute and imaginative.
Good job.
11/02/05
Very, very clever.
You are a wonderful, creative writer. I think you should graduate to the "Intermediate" section!
11/04/05
I loved this. Great job.