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Beautiful devotional and good powerful message of the importance of looking forward. Thank you for this. God Bless~
Love your straight forward style, it's what I can relate to. Very good devotional on topic.
Wow - I hesitate to glibly comment 'Excellent', or 'Great writing' or 'Really good' because of the seriousness and challenge of your topic. However, you have given a devotional that is right on topic, very thought-provoking and one that speaks straight to the heart and soul. Thankyou
You bring up a good point, The death of Jesus was sufficient. Stop looking back. I enjoyed the style of your piece. Very conversational.
This is an outstanding devotion. You did such a beautiful way of explaining this. I don't think I've ever heard it said quite this way before.

The only critique I have is when
you say Allow me to lend a little advice here, You don't need to tell the reader that you're going to say something, just say it.

You were spot on topic and did a delightful way of presenting your message. I constantly need to be reminded to let go and let go. You brought some new ways of thinking about my past that I haven't considered before and for that I thank you.
Congratulations for ranking 6th in level one!