The Official Writing Challenge
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10/31/05
This was tight. It was powerful and aromatic to be a short story. Would have liked to have heard more--but very nice. Well done. God bless ya, littlelight
10/31/05
Very interesting, like being a reporter and witness close to Mary. Nice narration and tight piece. Thank you.
11/01/05
Very interesting rendition of the story of Mary and the jar of ointment. It left a beautiful fragrance on my mind.
Hallelujah, indeed! Very nice.
11/02/05
You have a message of hope for this present day when you write "...the fragrance from the perfume in the jar would never again need to be used..." Lovely!