The Official Writing Challenge
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Nice job! He always uses our past (good, bad and the ugly) to help us minister to those around us... Thanks for sharing this.
Good imagery, and a great message. Thanks!
Well done fist entry, right on topic. I liked the title, but it was hard to say 3 times! Good job.
Your word pictures are poetic and impactful. I think perhaps the present tense caused some separation by the reader. I was trying so hard to keep up that I felt I wasn't truly engaged with the main character. Still, good message, artistic presentation. Keep writing!
This is quite lovely and has a lot of power in it. My only suggestion would be to give me more. Your words touched me and I want to know more about what you went through and what your friend is going through. You touched on the topic in a fresh and powerful way.
Congratulations! God Bless~
Congratulations for your ribbon in level one and for ranking 14th overall!