The Official Writing Challenge
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Beautifully written...You did a wonderful job of showing instead of telling.

Great job!
Oh, this is such a beautiful piece - I love your imagery and descriptions!
Oh the word pictures you paint as part of this budding romance! Loved it.
Very well done. Flows nicely.

A little red ink. In my opinion, you wouldn't describe yourself as, "My face lights up with a pleasing smile." You can't see your face or your smile. :)

I like the gentle tone of this piece.
I enjoyed this, not only did you receive encouragement from God and Joe but also from yourself. That's a great message to remember to encourage ourselves and not get discouraged or give up too easily.
Congratulations for ranking 12th in level one! Happy Dance! You did a great job. This week level one was quite competitive with several ranking in the top 20 overall! Keep writing and don't get discouraged. You done good!:)
Thanks for taking us into the thoughts of a teachable woman, perceiving her desire to remain in God's will and sensing her joy as he answers her prayers!
Catherine, I'm going to feature this story on the Front Page showcase for the week of May 28. Look for it on the FaithWriters home page--and congratulations!
I loved reading this. I especially liked your MCs runaway thoughts with the white horse, which were suddenly interrupted. Isn't that just like us girls to do that, (brought back many memories!). This is really easy to read and very uplifting. I would very much like to read more of this story; your MCs background, Joe's background, and how their love develops. Yeah, I'm a bit of a romantic! Well done.
I loved this! :) What a sweet story!