The Official Writing Challenge
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02/24/12
Simply brilliant use of the topic at hand. Loved the flow and message of this lovely poem.

Thank you. God Bless~
02/24/12
Super-fantastic. Lovely. Well done.

I especially loved this line:

"Flames licked the proper offering with a holy fire’s roar."
02/24/12
Oh, and I loved the title, that's what drew me in.
02/25/12
I was completely engaged throughout. Very nicely done.
This is such a fresh take on the topic. You did an excellent job with rhyming and flow. You also made your message quite clear.
03/01/12
Congratulations on your win! This was a lovely piece. Look forward to your next entry.

God bless you~
03/01/12
Great poem with an important message. Congratulations on your 2nd place win!