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My heart hurts for the MC. It won't be an easy road but family, friends, and strength from Jesus will turn this fiasco into something to glorify God. (If this is a true story, you've already started:)
02/11/12
My heart feels for the Mc. I want to place my arms around her...Time is a "healer" of all things, and Jesus is the "healer of everything."

Wonderful story-thanks for sharing. God Bless you~
02/11/12
That final sentence caused the knife of your pain to twist in my heart. Bless you as you keep your faith in God intact during these difficult memories.
02/14/12
Like the others who posted here, I suspect this could be a true story for you? If not, then you are certainly able to empathize with others who ARE in this situation. In either case, you tell it well..

OUCH! the ending was sad but perfect.

02/17/12
Thank you for your comments. I don't know if it is "legal" to thank you, but it seems rude not to. As I reread it, I see that astonishment is not what came through but abandonment or some other emotion. I did enjoy writing it though and finally admitting the experience and feelings. It was kind of self-healing.