The Official Writing Challenge
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This was a very different type of poem. I liked it. Unusual choice of positioning, but it worked!

I read it three times, and liked it more each time.

Great job- God Bless~
Took a couple times to read through this, but it's all there: the shame, the guilt, the victory. You've got quite a rhyme scheme. Very interesting.
Fantastic, well done and very very fresh. Loved it. More please. :-)
Nice! You DO have a way with words!
Wow this is such a beautiful, yet painful poem. It's so deep and could mean so many different things to different people. Outstanding poem!