The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a cute story and so relatable! I too am a stubborn mom (having gotten both some helpful and some not-so-helpful help from my children when it comes to using computers, cell phones, etc. Maybe that's why I like stories like this so much.
I really liked the humor in this piece. I could easily picture these two quibbling over the computer. You did a nice job covering the topic in a fun, fresh way.
This was such a fun story and an enjoyable read. As has been mentioned, I really could see these two have this "conversation." I could also feel the son getting impatient and the mom not understanding why.

The overall piece was written very strongly. I would have liked a stronger ending though, something perhaps in keeping with the back and forth of these two. But overall, this was one of my favorites!
This is a great story. I really enjoyed it and thought it was true to life.
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