The Official Writing Challenge
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11/17/11
This was entirely delightful... I smiled so wide at the end. Cute and on topic. God Bless~
This was a good story. You had an interesting beginning.The conflict was tantalizing. I might suggest that you ended it with Jeff saying I'm only 14. The last paragraph felt unnecessary. But you have a delightful sense of humor and I enjoyed your story.
11/20/11
A very good message here, don't cut corners! Oh, and don't trust 14 year old nephews with serious business matters!! This was on topic and well written. Well done.
11/25/11
This was cute and full of some good lessons. I enjoyed it.
11/25/11
Very Nice :) Good Job
12/01/11
congratulations and God Bless
12/01/11
CONGRATS EBONY!!! You're on the podium!!! :)
12/02/11
Thanks everyone for the cheers and encouragement! Thanks buddy group!
12/02/11
Yeh, Ebony! Congratulations!