The Official Writing Challenge
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Very thought provoking article
This was nicely done! I enjoyed it...very good job with emotions on many levels.

God Bless~
This is a great analogy of Spam. You did a nice job delivering a meaningful message.

A little red ink: In the sentence: If only she(Eve) was... you should use were instead of was because of the following rule: For situations where what you are saying is contrary to the facts (a hypothetical situation), were is always used.

Also, for the most part, you should put your punctuation inside of the quotation marks.

I really liked the reminder about not listening to lies. I struggle with self-esteem issues and this is a timely reminder for me.