The Official Writing Challenge
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What a beautiful love story! Well done.
This is a lovely story. You surprised me with the other man being Jesus. That doesn't happen to me very often.

In the beginning, you were doing more telling but near the end, you did a great job of showing.

Keep working on painting a picture for the reader. Your dialog was great and I enjoyed this creative love story.
Beautiful love story of the love triangle as it should beErin and Jordan side by side with Jesus at the top! Any relationship that keeps that triangle strong is a winning relationship! Great job on this sweet story.
What an amazing and touching story! I really could feel the love and commitment they had for each other and for the Lord. You led me well throughout the entire piece. This story put a smile on my face. Thanks!