The Official Writing Challenge
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10/24/05
Beautiful poem! I love to feel the rain wash over me and the fresh living water of the Holy Spirit washing over my inside, keeping me refreshed! Thanks:)
10/24/05
There's some great imagery and word choice here: sloppy drops slapping the ground, smother my face with damp kisses...Good stuff!
This is a true work of wonderful poetry. Thanks for sharing your talent.
10/28/05
Excellent! I love the way you ended it. Very creative.
10/29/05
The title caught my eye. I liked this poem and saw a world of possiblities. You might explore "shaping" this poem, I think all of the essential qualities are there; that would also help with the rhythm.
WONDERFUL POEM! I truly enjoyed it! May God continue to bless you.