The Official Writing Challenge
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There are certainly a lot of places that evil will tread.

This is a nice poem. Right to the point.

Thank you. Godbless
Great poem. I especially like the first line. I believe the dark recesses of the mind is the hardest place to escape.
Darkness is pushed out when the "Light" comes in. There is no place for darkness with our Savior's light. Nice job here, good message and powerful depiction. God Bless~
This is a powerful poem. I have felt exactly like this. It almost felt like you peeked into my head before writing this.

The only suggestion I might have is to work on the flow-try to have the same number of syllables and a pattern of stressed and unstressed words. This is something I really struggle with when I write poems and it's been mentioned to me before.

Personally I really enjoyed it and it spoke volumes to me. It has a great message and I could literally feel your anguish.
Congratulations. God bless~
Congratulations on a well deserved win!