The Official Writing Challenge
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Beautiful message, and nicely done. Good job. God Bless~
Choosing to write a comparison requires confidence in the message.

I'm sure it was difficult keeping within the boundaries of the word count.

I'd enjoy reading the fully developed version - which you've probably saved a copy of.
When blood is on clothing or fabric it leaves stains. The blood of Jesus covers me and removes all stains of sin and guilt!

I enjoyed reading the transformation of the MC. The human body is a miracle in its intricate form. Your story certainly showed this.
Love this! You're right, the Gospel makes no sense. I think it was C.S Lewis that said something to the effect of that is how he knew it must be true. Man would never have come up with that plan to save the world.
You certainly convinced me. It really is amazing to think that a loving God chose to allow us to make the choices that we do, and then to shed His blood out of love for us. Nice job.
Congratulations. God bless~
Congratulations on your high placing! Well deserved!