The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed your subtle humor and found myself chuckling throughout. You have a nice message without sounding preachy which is important as your MC found out! Nicely done.
08/26/11
This was purely entertaining, and a sweet story overall. I enjoyed it and it kept my attention throughout. Good job...God bless~
very well written story...good pacing and kept my interest throughout.
Touching and simplistic faith, and what an energetic desire this young man had. I pray that my faith and desire for the Lord and His ways will not fade but be renewed daily. Very well done! God truths here-it is better to live it,not give it, love 'em,not shove 'em.:)
09/13/11
Great down-to-earth message, wrapped up in some gentle humour and strong internal discoveries for your MC.