The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow, If I were an artist/painter, your descriptions would make an awesome picture. Very descriptive and understandable. I like it very much. Sherry
This is excellent! One of my favorites in all entry levels!
I thoroughly enjoyed your article. You have a splendid imagination.

Barb Green
Great descriptions of the characters. The story seemed to come alive for me.
Congratulations on ranking 7th in level one!
wow! such a passionate retelling of the story from the POV of the thief you truly got under the skin of the characters. I loved the contrast between the two thieves and the believable backstory one of the best fictional retellings i have read for a long time. I enjoy trying my hand at this but you have a real gift.... derseved to be higher in my opinion.