The Official Writing Challenge
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Yes, we have so little time here. I agree with you that it would be wise to use our time well.

May I suggest that it might encourage more people to read your essay if you split it into paragraphs.
A contineous sheet of words is offputting for many readers.
Wasting time is a waste of His resources. Did you mean "want to do a 'go' job" in the beginning or 'good job' for my Jesus?
I agree that paragraphs would invite the reader into your thoughts rather than just a sheet of words.
You make some great points in this devotion. Perhaps some personal story and breaking it into smaller paragraphs to give the reader some white space will help turn this into a very good message for so many people. You did a nice job.
07/25/11
Thanks so much for the feedback on the smaller paragraphs -adding white space. Also it is good job for Jesus not go job as someone inquired- so I must make sure everything is proofed better before I submit.
07/26/11
well thought out and you have a great little gem.... i have nothing to add to the other comments :-)