The Official Writing Challenge
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06/12/11
Wow - what an experience! No doubt your outlook changed. Thanks so much for sharing this. God is amazing.
06/12/11
This is a really neat story -so much fun, even more so because it's true. Thanks for sharing.
I love Judy Blume she is one of my all time favorites. Her Margaret book was the first one I read.

Your story is really exciting and stands on it's own with the suspense. I don't think you needed the opening paragraph. There probably are not many men familiar with that book. Plus your story really got exciting when you gave the reader a peek into your past.

I felt chills when you told about God showing his presence and while he may not always do that when he does it's sure to make a life long impression.