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06/12/11
What a scary thing to happen. You told this story with tenderness. Thanks for sharing.
06/12/11
Sounds like they got the baby to the doctor just in time. From that point on the story seemed to end almost too quickly; yet it did end well.

The baby was truth blessed to have such an attentive father. Very enjoyable read.

06/13/11
I am so glad Baby Beth got the proper treatment in time. It is scary to watch someone having a seizure at any time, especially a newborn baby.

If this story is biographical, I can tell you two make terrific parents.
Having been an OB nurse for many years my heart thudded as I read this story. I always liked working OB because it was the happiest place in the hospital but when it was sad it is the saddest place. You did a nice job showing the emotions and fears the new parents faced.
06/15/11
Your story was very tender and if true, God Bless You both and Baby Beth.