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What a scary thing to happen. You told this story with tenderness. Thanks for sharing.
Sounds like they got the baby to the doctor just in time. From that point on the story seemed to end almost too quickly; yet it did end well.

The baby was truth blessed to have such an attentive father. Very enjoyable read.

I am so glad Baby Beth got the proper treatment in time. It is scary to watch someone having a seizure at any time, especially a newborn baby.

If this story is biographical, I can tell you two make terrific parents.
Having been an OB nurse for many years my heart thudded as I read this story. I always liked working OB because it was the happiest place in the hospital but when it was sad it is the saddest place. You did a nice job showing the emotions and fears the new parents faced.
Your story was very tender and if true, God Bless You both and Baby Beth.