The Official Writing Challenge
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Excellent writing. Scary- you penned your story for 2024 but I fear this could "come to pass" at most any time. Jesus is coming! Thanks for the story. Keep up the good work.
It is so sad that our own country is turning into a police state. In the need to "not offend," we end up offending the most important person of all--Christ.

Thank you for the wake up call.
chilling and well written. you kept the momentum going. well done
This is a great story. I was holding my breath ever since she was pulled over.

My only suggestion might be in a story this short you may want to introduce the conflict earlier. I like how you kept me holding my breath until the end but it would have been outstanding to have held it from the first paragraph.

You did a great job with the characters and dialog. You are also mastering what even the Masters struggle with and that's showing vs telling. I could easily see it unfolding.
Congratulations for ranking 10th in level one!