The Official Writing Challenge
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05/26/11
Nice writing- much to ponder. Whatever is lovely or of good report...think on these things! Keep writing.
05/27/11
Two contrasting emotions here. The first happy and hope-filled. The second is sad, and tugs at the readers heart.
This is an intense piece that could show several things depending who the reader is. I saw fear and depression, almost a lack of hope. You did a great job eliciting such emotions. I do pray that you can once again see the beauty in the little things. Well done!