The Official Writing Challenge
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Neat story. Would be a good devotional entry...
It's funny how twins are so different sometimes.

Keep up the good work:D
I thoroughly enjoyed your story. I am a twin also. I don't think either of us are that outgoing, but the older we get the more willing we are to speak up.

The only suggestion I have is to double space between paragraphs.