The Official Writing Challenge
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One of my favourite moments in the Bible-so maybe a bit biased but I enjoyed how you described what was going on. Wish I knew what Jesus was writing? Honestly-has it been worked out?(Sounding very ignorant here:)
A very good retelling of this Bible story.

It would have been much easier to read, if you would put two spaces between each paragraph. Other than that, it was well done.