The Official Writing Challenge
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I am sorry-I am a sucker for this kind of writing-gave me goosebumps, as I could just picture it-which is great! Love your descriptions and... dunno really-just loved it:)
I loved this mix of prayer and poetry. It really struck a powerful chord.
A very intense piece. I could sense the struggle for release. Lots of descriptive writing here. "It" seemed somewhat repetitive. Another word for prayer would eliminate the repetition. A Thesaurus is a writer's best friend. I use it all the time.:-)

Unique and creative take on the topic!