The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow. Sounds like a traumatic experience. If this is a real story in the writer's life sounds like it didn't waver you faith. Thanks for sharing this story.
This is a great message and told in a very relatable way Nice job
You packed a lot into this fast-paced story. I would have been nice to slow it down a bit at spots - like the part about that male angel. Perhaps the word count got in your way.

It's a fun ride, though, with a nice message.
I feel stessed out too-just reading it! I liked the concept and the faith staying firm in the middle of not having any control.
I think spacing would make it an easier read, breaking up the two paragraphs. Also spending some more time on the angels would be nice too. Keep up the writing!!!
This was easy to relate to. It is important that we let go and let God in all situations in our life.
WOW! That was a real "learning experience!" Every time I've crossed over that body of water I was relieved to reach the other side! Nice story, thanks.

Wing His Words!