The Official Writing Challenge
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05/08/11
Great analogy - with very good descriptions. Enjoyed this!
05/10/11
Good job! I'll think of this next time I go bargain hunting. Thank you.
05/10/11
A great message with a most understandable example. Would be a great piece to put in a devotional book. Keep up the good work:)
This was a nice devotion with a strong message. I really liked that you shared a bit of yourself. My only suggestion would be toleave out the last line, you've made your message Clear and asking the question gives it a slightly preachy feel. If you wanted to add a discussion question at the end like What time in your life were you glad Jesus came at no cost to you? That's not the best example but you did a great job showing Jesus' sacrifice in terms everyone can relate to.
05/13/11
congrats on placing at your level...

Keep Writing :)
Congratulations for placing 6th in level one!