The Official Writing Challenge
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It sounds to me like you are an outstanding daddy of an outstanding kid. Good job!
Okay, you got me catching my breath and holding back tears. What a dad! And you write well too!
A great story and well written, with just a few corrections needed. Loved the title and the ending. Your dialogue was authentic and flowed well.

Three cheers for Zeek and Daddy too.
Loved this story. Reminds me of my son's first days of baseball now that we're at his last days.
Ah... love this little guy's story. I hope this is true. :) It's perfect for the topic. I could see it all!
Loved this story! I could just see little Zeke. He reminded me of my nephews and watching them play tee ball.
My grandma heart loved every word! Kudos to Dad AND Zeek! Memories built for a lifetime! This is a winner in MY book.
Well-written and an enjoyable read! I like the characterization, the pace and the plot. You have successfully captured your readers' interest from the start to the end. Excellent work.