The Official Writing Challenge
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An outbreak of God's love what A wonderful description of what he had planned.
It is truly amazing how God decides to bless us, not by anything we do to deserve it.
I kept waiting to be pulled a bit deeper into the experience though. By picking out a few specific moments that you remember most, rather than just telling of the amazing times, the reader could have seen first hand the amazing times you shared with that church.
You have excellent phrasing and the story did have a nice flow. Keep up the good work!
Congratulations for placing 11th in level one!