The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh, I love this!

I kept thinking this was Biblical fiction, and it is, but I kept expecting a familiar story. Not really a criticism, though. :)

I loved how you presented this.
Excellent writing. I loved how the weariness in the beginning was met with the rugged cross and nail pierced hands at the end.
Your word choices are very effective...they create a lot of emotion without being too flowery -- beautiful prose.
Wow, you write really well. I loved it!!
Congratulations for placing 9th in your level!
Wow! I didn't know! Thanks!