The Official Writing Challenge
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This poem took my breath away. I especially liked the first couple and last couple of stanzas about the volcanoes and the war and God's eternal plan.
good :-) i liked the way in the first few verses you used the word eternity in the last line and then you changed the focus from the created to the creator and to Jesus. clever! I liked the rhythm too
I'm not a big poem lover but this is absolutely perfect. Beautifully done.
Congratulations for placing 10th in your level!