The Official Writing Challenge
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03/11/11
I love this; thisis a beautiful meditation. Very visual.

Suggets you place a space between paragraphs to make it more readable.

Lovely metaphor with a fresh perspective.
03/11/11
You created a wonderful picture of time.
03/12/11
Beautiful!
03/13/11
A lot of deep thoughts here and very well done, in my estimation.
03/13/11
lovely! especially the chipmuncks toes :-)
03/16/11
I loved the seeds being compared to minutes. Great devotion. I would use spacing to make the article easier to read. Keep up the writing:)
03/17/11
Congratulations on your 3rd place win. Your piece was very thought-provoking and interesting.
03/17/11
this lovely piece deserved this placing... congrats!