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03/11/11
I enjoyed your story's conclustion. Nicely done.
03/11/11
Short, sweet and poignant. Excellent message powerfully told in few words. Enjoyed this.
03/12/11
I've heard stories like this where the twister hits all around and leaves the one house/building alone. One question, though. How old is Celeste and her husband? In the beginning the baby is there newborn, in the end they've owned the home for 28-years. Married at 20, they would be around 48 years old. Other than that, this gives food to chew on for your reader. :) Nicely done.
03/13/11
lovely. i liked this story and the expansion into other events in the concluding paragraphs.