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I enjoyed your story's conclustion. Nicely done.
Short, sweet and poignant. Excellent message powerfully told in few words. Enjoyed this.
I've heard stories like this where the twister hits all around and leaves the one house/building alone. One question, though. How old is Celeste and her husband? In the beginning the baby is there newborn, in the end they've owned the home for 28-years. Married at 20, they would be around 48 years old. Other than that, this gives food to chew on for your reader. :) Nicely done.
lovely. i liked this story and the expansion into other events in the concluding paragraphs.