The Official Writing Challenge
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02/17/11
Tender, sad story but your ending is one of hope and encouragement. Your descriptions are good and your story is well told. Unsure how well this fits with the topic but nicely told. Thank you for sharing.
02/17/11
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Deb (Challenge Coordinator)
02/19/11
very well told and you "paint" a depressing picture as well as bringing in the theme of acceptance and hope.
you have described the various "illnesses" well.
Congratulations for placing 11th in level one.