The Official Writing Challenge
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02/12/11
Adherence to the topic . . . well . . . dialogue and character development . . . well . . . honing of the plot . . . well, let me say this . . . there are seeds of some powerful story-telling talent evident here . . . a deep well’s worth. Looking forward to future entries.
What a touching story with a great reminder about not judging people on looks, language, and job stature. You created some delightful characters and dialog.
01/11/12
This touched my heart...It was powerfully emotional and a profound commentary of the world today. Good Job -
God Bless~