The Official Writing Challenge
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02/05/11
I really liked your description from bleakness to beauty. The snow has been blanketing many states including mine.

I learned this week that is better to divide each paragraph with double spacing.
02/07/11
Some lovely descriptive work here - keep up the good work. Yes, a good to double space a bit - look at some of the masters' pieces to get the idea.
02/07/11
good writing, beautiful descriptions and i loved the way your brought it around to the opening at the end by referring to the weather forcast. snow does indeed look lovely :-)
Congratulations for placing 6th in level one!