The Official Writing Challenge
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What a bittersweet romance. However, some never even get 18 months. Your story reminded me to enjoy every minute.
01/27/11
WOW! What an incredible portrayal of Jesus love. Although the sadness of the story touched me, it was the beautiful picture painted at the end where they meet in Heaven. Wonderfully written!
01/28/11
Beautifully written - I was hooked from the beginning! It managed to convey emotion without being sappy. Great job!
01/31/11
good writing and well crafted.
02/05/11
I am so sorry to hear of your loss, but your reunion in Heaven will be awesome. For some reason your quotation marks were scrambled letters on my screen.

Congratulations on your well written piece.