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Very interesting, realistic and "write" on topic. Glad to see a happy ending after all "brave face" put herself through. While "Life Line" is a wonderful description of God's saving work in her life, I think "Brave Face" would make a good title too.
I enjoyed reading this very much. It was easy to read and follow even with all the
time period changes. Good job.
awww very interesting story and a good title for the piece. It is somehow told without emotion but is very emotional :-) at the same time.
thank you for an interesting story line
Even though the descriptions are limited it never takes away from the story. Great way to pack in a lot of content in a limited space.
This story is so sad and could be so many people. I ached for the character and liked that she could be anyone. Hopefully this may open some parents eyes and save someone's life.