The Official Writing Challenge
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an interesting and engaging piece thank you. I think if you had made more of where the Blue moon them fitted into this it would have sparkled a little more. :-)
Your title was a great fit for your short story I emphasize short.:-) It was a no-nonsense, to the point account, and it moved along towards a good conclusion. I noted a few missed punctuations, and inconsistent verb tenses.

A great illustration of what happens when our lives reflect a desire to obey God's word. Thank you.
It's not so easy to say I'm sorry, especially if you feel angry at the time. Forgiveness is sometimes difficult, but much better in the long run.
Congratulations on your much deservd win.
Congratulations! Great job!