The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow! I loved this. What a great message, and worded in such a skillful way you don't know what to expect next. Are you sure you're a beginner?
Wow! Excellent first I was a bit overwhelmed by the dialog but I re-read your piece and I am glad I did.
gosh!!! not what i was expecting at the end.... i imagined a brother? identical twin? or even that he was undercover doing some research. Well done for such an original piece of writing.
I hate to be an echo, but are you sure you belong in Level 1? In my opinion, your entry was so well crafted with a wonderful plot and message. Even the title piqued my curiosity. At first I thought it was redundant, but now I'm comfortable :-) with it.

Without a doubt, I'm sure you'll be moving up soon. Well done.
What a neat story! You had me on the edge of my chair the whole time. Very well done.
I absolutely loved this story! You took me in the opposite direction I was expecting and that doesn't happen often. It's a very good thing and a wonderful message Congratulations for placing 6th in level 1.