The Official Writing Challenge
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What a beautiful poem, so well written, and full of great examples.
great poem it flows well and is full of great examples of non verbal language
A really sweet poem. So many good thoughts about body language. Nice work.
Very soothing poem and almost read like a lullaby.
I like this. It reads very smoothly, even for someone like me who doesn't always "get" poetry. :) Nice job.
Nice job on the poem!
Good job. I liked the progression of your poem. Keep writing.
I love it!
Perhaps you could add extra spacing after the rhyming set so it is easier to follow.

Great job! Keep it up!
You're a poet. Did you know it? -:) Love it. Great rhyming and a truly creative way to point out one of life's oft repeated truisms.
This is lovely. The flow and rhyme is perfect.
Great poem. Loved the pictures your writing brought to my mind. Keep Writing!
Beautiful poem. Nice message.
I enjoyed your poem very much. I was right on the topic and it was easy to read. Good flow.
Congratulations on your highly commended!
Wow! Thankyou for the wonderful feedback and encouragement on my first ever entry into the writing challenge!! Will have another go for sure! :)