The Official Writing Challenge
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The title says it all. Money can be an assisting false God. You have a good message.

You have a few mistakes that are a little distracting like a bed side tables could be a bedside table.

I'd hate to see little things like that distract the reader from your message. Keep writing and work on proofing and maybe checking out Jan's Writing Basics in the forum. She has helped me with my writing so much.

You're doing a great job keep up the good work!
I like your unique slant on this week's topic. Good message in your story. I see lots of potential in your writing...keep going.