The Official Writing Challenge
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You told a nice story about the cultural differences. I like how the MC took time to figure out what was bothering Sue. She also cared enough to explain and look things up for Sue.

Although you did try to tie in the topic it was a tad weak on it. You also had a few typos humors instead of humorous, affect instead of effect.

Most of those are small mistakes. The real power is the passion you put into your words. I can tell the MC and Sue had a special connection. Nice job. Keep writing.
Interesting piece. Communicating in an understandable way takes work, and updating as the world changes. The only negative comment I would have is that the ending was kind of abrupt, but then, 750 words isn't much. You write well. I agree - keep writing.
11/13/10
I enjoyed reading your article and hearing about Sue. You made some interesting points. Thanks for writing.
That was a great read. Held my interest all through. I get the feeling you started out with a wide lens and then narrowed it down down down to cyber communication. Shann always gives real pearls of advice and I can only say 'be encouraged by what she says'. I have.