The Official Writing Challenge
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11/12/10
You made great use of the topic for your devotional thought. One small suggestion would be to put direct quotes from the Bible in quotation marks and possibly add a few more breaks in the paragraphs. Overall a very good entry!
You make some great points in this sweet story. Well done.
11/14/10
Good flow, easy to read, liked the take on the topic and the overall message of this devotional. Good writing.
11/18/10
Hope you're monitoring your email along with your spiritual inbox. Excellent entry and deserving of your 1st place win AND EC! Congratulations!
11/18/10
You put a lot of thought and creativity into this devotional. Gave me a lot to ponder. Congrats on your EC.!
Congratulations on your EC! See you in the next level. :)