The Official Writing Challenge
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09/20/05
There were a few problems with sentence structure and word choice (comprehensive / apprehensive), but they didn't get in the way of this beautiful story of reconciliation. Thank you for sharing.
09/22/05
That's good. You (or said character) had an awakening. Very nice. Very true. Very sweet and good to read. I like.