The Official Writing Challenge
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10/28/10
Precious!
10/28/10
In reading your story, I thought all along you were writing to your grandmother. What a sweet story. blessings...
wow! so beautifully sweet!
Well written and on topic. A very enjoyable to read.
This is so sweet- aw to have the faith of a child.
10/30/10
Very sweet!

I'd have liked for this little girl to have a name, and perhaps less dialog and more characterization.

Really enjoyed the relationship you portrayed between this sweetheart and her mom--precious.
Congratulations for placing 9th in level 1!