The Official Writing Challenge
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09/19/05
This is sad and true, and you end with a lesson that needs to be spoken. Work a little bit on punctuation and sentence structure, and you'll have a piece publishable, perhaps in a denominational magazine.
09/22/05
I get a spooky feel when reading this. Good atmosphere and a different way of telling the story. Thanks for enthralling me!
A personel story, my heart goes out the family of Grahem. These are often the hardest to write but you have done wonderfully well. With a little polish, this should be offered to a wider audience. Sometimes we are too quick to judge those who end their own lives without fully understanding the very real pain that such people are in. God bless you for sharing this.